Tuesday, November 2, 2010

more of my final submission

once upon a time there was this evil step mother. her name was Cruella De Vil, not really but thats deffinently what i felt like. she lived in this apartment with my prince charming of a father. he is roylaty in my eyes, he is tall, thin, dark hair, dark eyes, hard working honest man from a well respected family in the land of lenawee county. as for Cruella well she was from a very nice family as well, they had a nice place, a good restraunt, and everything was going good for them exept this one bad seed, Cruella. you should now this scaring image of her she had an over sized upper body and a tiny little head, she was about five foot nothing and was adicted to her cigarets and torchering me the perfect, inisent, daddy's little girl, middle child.

i should let you know that everything you read in the fairytalles about step mothers is oh so true.

1 comment:

  1. Try metaphor in the physical description. Caution not to use cliched metaphors but create unique ones.

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